Hi John, I may be coming in late, and this is not mainly about the slurs on the guitar. This is a very good composition, to begin with. But there is just something in the lyrics that I don't seem to understand. We also compose songs for our church; composing song is one gift that we desired and will keep on desiring. I'll throw this question: What do you mean by 'I'll make it all go away'? What example did Christ do, that 'He made it go away'? If this is a sensitive question, let me know. We can e-mail each other. Just being careful about compositions. A veteran cautioned us on this, in that, any mistakes (I'm not saying yours is one) will go a long, long way, once the song is cut/burned into records. We'd always have our pastor sort of 'review' the soundness of the lyrics, and this is what I'm pointing out here. Yours is a good composition, and nice work on NWC. Thanks!