Here is what I came up with, plus I have a cheat sheet of comments from orchestrations manuals on how to write for the oboe.
<snip>The colours you apparently want to use are missing - other than the first few "chords" showing ranges, all the notes are the same colour. The dynamics as shown don't clearly show the message you're trying to convey. Why are they there?
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